Dirigo, Poems, Maine and James Schuyler
Well, here I was thinking I was so clever back in 2007 to set out writing love poems to the State of Maine and calling it "To Dirigo." So original of me, right? Since that is the state motto. But guess what I discovered a year later (after millions of revisions)? I'm not the only one to have incorporated the antiquated word into a poem:
PenobscotOpen water facing Bradbury snags fog in its spruce.Eagle has a meadow down its spine;Compass, a cave; Scrag, five trees.On Dirigo, apples hang down into raspberries;nearby, a lilac. Many rememberits old name, Butter, though Little Spruce Headonly one man still call Frenchman's.Birch-pale Beach has a chapel,Bear has sheep. On others:seals, butter-and-eggs, cellar holes.From here we see them all, and more,and the Camden Hills, Mount Desert, Blue Hill, Deer Isleand ocean facing Isle au Hautwhere the breakers roll stones to cannon balls.
[side note: I have "Penobscot" in a title in that "To Dirigo" series too, though that was a deliberate subtle homage to this poem because it was a revision that came after I received 'Freely Espousing', where the poem is from...]
=sigh= Lovely, innit?
Of course, in this poem, Dirigo is a reference to the island called Dirigo. But the island got its name from the motto. "I Lead" is what Dirigo means by the way. Yes, Maine, yes you do lead. You lead poets to write poems, you old saucy minx, you. In the case of James Schuyler, amazingly beautiful poems. In the case of Bridget Eileen? I'm no James Schuyler, obv. And time will tell if I do like this current, final seeming version as much as I think I do...I'll let you judge with the revealing of a sampling. The spacing's off because that's how Blogger rolls, but you get the gist:
The First Field
the first thing I remember
is you saying
Come out
in the whispered grass of the first field
I stepped on to it---
felt a jolt from your
plush and sweet green---
and so we began
Cocoon
pink leaves
sprouting around
the windows
that snap
from fall’s
cooling
what is that hum
that balm
that comes
from the changing
that first year
snow fell
on forsythia
seven days into
May
you always were surprising
Baxter
crackling creek
tangy seed of this snack grape
spitout
I snap a picture of a
prize fish
the mountain’s coming down
cooling the park at 2:30
you’re just green
I don’t know why that’s something
the abundance of it
I suppose
knocks me
From the Kitchen Table
Maples, firs, birch aim down at
Dinner's shadow window
Then pearl with the veering sun
The Penobscot
stinging sweet liquid
& smoke
blue brown white rush
rust & spike
sounding release
nothing more to come
nothing more to come
now move down with
the ridged floe
Old Town
I lived on a brown river
gasping for the mill stink air
in a room with a dressing nook
dark wood panels and a tiny closet
I lived there by myself
I drank tea from the dollar store
I wore very interesting clothes
I drank brandy
I was alone with an open gray sky
I left
Leaving
the conifers and conifers and conifers
the bright green maple tinted
blue at dusk
orange bursting to white
every bend of road
something
There you go. Like I said, it's not James Schuyler, but we can't any of us be, can we?
All this reflection is psyching me up for Wednesday, man. Lots of people RSVPed yes on Facebook. Very exciting.
Good Night! See you in the morning. I think I'm going to type and post the April Forsythia poem by Schuyler. It always reminds me of this story about a drunk man at the corner Chinese food restaurant, but I'll get to that tomorrow...